Extreme horror • Short fiction

5 Tips For Writing Short Horror Stories.

By Terry Wilding

Short horror isn’t about dragging readers through a maze of subplots or endless backstory. It’s about striking fast, cutting deep, and leaving a sting that lingers long after the last line. A short story gives you limited space, so every sentence has to earn its place. Below are five core principles that will keep your horror sharp, focused, and genuinely unsettling.

1. Start Late and End Early

Short horror thrives on immediacy. You don’t have room for warm-ups, so don’t ease the reader in. Drop them straight into something that’s already wrong. A sound that shouldn’t be there. A room that feels slightly off. A character already cracking under pressure. And when the moment comes to close the story, don’t over-explain. Horror decays under too much light. Leave the reader with a question, an implication, a final image that haunts more than a full explanation ever could.

2. Focus on One Fear and Drill Into It

The biggest mistake new horror writers make is trying to cram in too many ideas. A short story is a scalpel, not a Swiss-army knife. Choose one fear, paranoia, guilt, body horror, grief, supernatural dread, loss of control, and build the entire story around it. Everything should orbit that emotional centre: setting, pacing, character choices, even the ending. When you strip away the noise and bore down on one core dread, the story hits harder.

3. Use Sensory Detail Like a Weapon

Horror is physical. Readers don’t want abstract descriptions; they want to feel the wrongness crawling under the skin. Use detail sparingly but precisely:

  • The tacky drag of drying blood
  • Breath that smells like cold earth
  • A room too warm for the season
  • Something soft brushing a character’s ankle when they’re alone

One vivid, concrete detail can do more than a paragraph of flowery prose. In short horror, specificity is the knife.

4. Let the Characters Make the Horror Worse

The best horror doesn’t happen to characters, it happens because of them. Give your protagonist a flaw that pushes them deeper into danger: pride, denial, jealousy, desperation, guilt. Their choices create the spiral. When the reader can see the mistake coming but the character can’t, or won’t, that tension becomes irresistible. The truth is simple: people make their own nightmares, and watching that unfold is far more disturbing than a monster popping out of the shadows.

5. Twist the Knife in the Final Lines

A short horror story lives or dies on its ending. After all the buildup, the reader expects a payoff, but not necessarily a resolution. Your final lines should:

  • Reveal something chilling
  • Reframe what the reader thought they understood
  • Imply a bigger horror just out of view
  • Leave a wound rather than tie a bow

The ending is the echo that keeps the story alive in the reader’s mind. Make it count.

Final Thoughts

Short horror rewards precision, restraint, and nerve. When you cut the fat and sharpen the tension, you create stories that hit fast and stay with the reader long after they’ve turned the page. Whether you’re writing supernatural terror, psychological tension, or full-on gore, remember: horror doesn’t need space to grow, just a crack to crawl through.

Content warning: graphic violence, psychological horror, and adult themes. These are not cosy ghost stories.

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Terry Wilding writes modern horror with an old-school edge: direct, vicious, but always rooted in character. When he isn’t tearing lives apart on the page, he works as a university lecturer in computer science, which turns out to be excellent training for imagining worst-case scenarios.

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